A short story
Good twist at the end... feels like there are more stories to tell.
This gets really good descriptive and world-building mileage for something so concise. Well done
Also love the twist at the end here. Optimize, optimize, optimize... and for what, really?
Loved this, would definitely read more in this setting!
Very immersive worldbuilding, nice details and descriptions, good job! I liked it.
Thanks Vanya!
Great twist. I like retro feel too: punch cards. Seems wonderfully incongruous in a sf setting.
Dystopian, love it!
Thank you! You might also like the other piece I published here - https://fictitious.substack.com/p/no-duplicates-a-short-story
Good twist at the end... feels like there are more stories to tell.
This gets really good descriptive and world-building mileage for something so concise. Well done
Also love the twist at the end here. Optimize, optimize, optimize... and for what, really?
Loved this, would definitely read more in this setting!
Very immersive worldbuilding, nice details and descriptions, good job! I liked it.
Thanks Vanya!
Great twist. I like retro feel too: punch cards. Seems wonderfully incongruous in a sf setting.
Dystopian, love it!
Thank you! You might also like the other piece I published here - https://fictitious.substack.com/p/no-duplicates-a-short-story